Seagulls Have Lost All Hyppia

[essbee]

That article is an absolute piece of sh*t.

 

[majnoon]

You've shown your own stupidity by saying that was a reasonable article..

well if im stupid, what does that make you!!!!

 

[SkipFC]

Oh wow, don't know what I was expecting putting it on here but thanks regardless.

Just an opinion but I think Kit Symons in a suit seemed to be a man who took his job seriously.

 

[spence]

Oh wow, don't know what I was expecting putting it on here but thanks regardless.

Just an opinion but I think Kit Symons in a suit seemed to be a man who took his job seriously.

Not the best article mate but thanks for posting it. I'm grateful if others aren't.

 

[drew]

Terrible article but to be fair, he might only have started the course in September!

 

[Ali_rrr]

Oh wow, don't know what I was expecting putting it on here but thanks regardless.

Just an opinion but I think Kit Symons in a suit seemed to be a man who took his job seriously.

Ignore some of the posts here. You're a student, not a professional sports journalist. It wasn't the best article it could have been, but that's why you're studying.

 

[LamieRobertson]

Oh wow, don't know what I was expecting putting it on here but thanks regardless.

Just an opinion but I think Kit Symons in a suit seemed to be a man who took his job seriously.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/sport/0/football/26113048

he wore a suit..probably took his job seriously

got a few of felix magath as well.

...but i do wish you well in your chosen career...sincerely

 

[majnoon]

well said spence

 

[Soulman]

Like the rumours thread, i wonder if the thread starters will get the spelling of Sami's surname correct before he does/does not move on.

 

[SIMMO SAYS]

Not the best article mate but thanks for posting it. I'm grateful if others aren't.

You're grateful for what?
The thread title doesn't make sense nor what's in it.
If the fella 's first language is not English he should say so before his thread then he would not get the tongue in cheek replies.

 

[Winker]

Hi guys and girls,

I'm a sports journalism student and was in the press box for yesterday's game and couldn't help but notice your manager's body language so here's something I wrote about.

Please read and give feedback and maybe even a follow on twitter [MENTION=30456]SkipFC[/MENTION]

His name is Hyypia not Hyppia, at least start on the right foot - FFS. Gus Poyet didn't wear a tie with his suit but that didn't stop him from reaching the play-offs. There is more to football than the attire of the manager.

 

[Don Quixote]

I think it is promising. The only way to get better is practice, so keep it up.

 

[SIMMO SAYS]

Jeez------------getting two thumbs down from wannabe students------I won't sleep tonight

 

[Deleted User X18H]

Hi guys and girls,

I'm a sports journalism student and was in the press box for yesterday's game and couldn't help but notice your manager's body language so here's something I wrote about.

Please read and give feedback and maybe even a follow on twitter [MENTION=30456]SkipFC[/MENTION]


http://skippykelly.wordpress.com/2014/11/30/seagulls-have-lost-all-hyppia/

Suicide son . Believe me.

 

[essbee]

I think it is promising. The only way to get better is practice, so keep it up.

...and the best way to improve is to show your work to someone, a tip that the OP clearly did not
follow before coming on here.

 

[spence]

You're grateful for what?
The thread title doesn't make sense nor what's in it.
If the fella 's first language is not English he should say so before his thread then he would not get the tongue in cheek replies.

I'm grateful because.....

1) Someone took their time to write that for us.

2) I appreciate the effort even if the execution isn't perfect.

3) I get the impression he is fairly young.

4) I can see the lad tried even though the flaws are clear.

5) Maybe i'm going soft in my old age.

 

[WhingForPresident]

You've shown your own stupidity by saying that was a reasonable article..

well if im stupid, what does that make you!!!!

Someone that has a degree in journalism and has actually worked as a sports journalist..

 

[SIMMO SAYS]

I'm grateful because.....

1) Someone took their time to write that for us.

2) I appreciate the effort even if the execution isn't perfect.

3) I get the impression he is fairly young.

4) I can see the lad tried even though the flaws are clear.

5) Maybe i'm going soft in my old age.

Do you take in sick animals as well

 

[Bozza]

Alternatively, there's this nicely structured and well-written piece that captures the mood of many right now - https://nortr3nixy.nimpr.uk/content.php?353-It-s-time-for-hei-hei-Hyypi%E4

 

[GingerBeerMan]

Really, really badly written. Fair play for getting yourself to the Amex and getting some journalism experience though. Good writing skills are nothing if you haven't got the experience and contacts. Perhaps take a few writing courses though, every single sentence reads badly and is hard to understand.