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Ernest
Stupid IDIOT
DID he mention about his ANGER with the TEAM news leaks ?
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Deleted User X18H
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Yep he wants to know your 'sauce'
2005
hoveboyslim
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The article reads like a stream of consciousness. It's all over the place. Just because Poyet says something you are not required to report verbatim.
The game plan will not change if the Seagulls play Leeds or even – hypothetically – Real Madrid. Why not just say - whoever the opposition may be Poyet is adamant he will keep to his style of football.
The game plan will not change if the Seagulls play Leeds or even – hypothetically – Real Madrid. Why not just say - whoever the opposition may be Poyet is adamant he will keep to his style of football.
Because it's 'whomever'.
turienzo's lovechild
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hb&b....out of interest have you ever had any form of journalism training?
turienzo's lovechild
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sentence 5 is too long and sentence 6 is too short.....for example
turienzo's lovechild
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and basically the whole thing is one long poyet quote....you need to pick the best bits of what he's said and pad it out with your own words really....
Doc Lynam
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This to short as well?
turienzo's lovechild
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your sentence? no, because it's not written as part of a breaking news story
Brighton247.com
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I very much doubt we will see many 90 minute performances from Vicente... would love to be proven wrong!
hoveboyslim
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Yes you're right. I'd had a couple of Whiskys by then!
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No! And in hindsight I am brilliant arn't I.
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Because Gus always uses Real Madrid as an example. I think he's a fan. And because it gives depth to the example Leeds or Real Madrid.
My thoughts exactly.