[Misc] I Wanna Be Adored - Chapter 1 - Magic Bus

[BadFish]

I really enjoy writing and have been working on an ideas for a story set in Brighton.

I thought it might a good idea to share it on here as a series of posts and Bozza has very kindly allowed me to publish in the Writing section of NSC.

Each Chapter is quite short so I will post the ones I have written fairly quickly.

Any feedback, encouragement or constructive criticism will be welcomed as I am trying to improve as a writer.

I hope everyone enjoys the writing and maybe it can be something to do in these strange times.

https://nortr3nixy.nimpr.uk/content.php?836-I-Wanna-Be-Adored-Chatper-1-Magic-Bus-1987


More of the story and some other short stories and poems are on this website if you are interested.

https://www.abctales.com/user/vinetales

Thank you, Badfish

 

[Guinness Boy]

Cool - will give it a read tonight. Glad [MENTION=6886]Bozza[/MENTION] was able to make room in his Inbox

 

[The Tactician]

I really enjoy writing and have been working on an ideas for a story set in Brighton.

I thought it might a good idea to share it on here as a series of posts and Bozza has very kindly allowed me to publish in the Writing section of NSC.

Each Chapter is quite short so I will post the ones I have written fairly quickly.

Any feedback, encouragement or constructive criticism will be welcomed as I am trying to improve as a writer.

I hope everyone enjoys the writing and maybe it can be something to do in these strange times.

https://nortr3nixy.nimpr.uk/content.php?836-I-Wanna-Be-Adored-Chatper-1-Magic-Bus-1987


More of the story and some other short stories and poems are on this website if you are interested.


https://www.abctales.com/user/vinetales

Thank you, Badfish

The second sentence has a small typo, but other than that I'm a fan! Nice punchy opening, will definitely be reading more. Thanks for being brave enough to share - writing ain't easy, though it's very easy to pick apart the work of others. Keep at it

 

[BadFish]

The second sentence has a small typo, but other than that I'm a fan! Nice punchy opening, will definitely be reading more. Thanks for being brave enough to share - writing ain't easy, though it's very easy to pick apart the work of others. Keep at it

Thank you, i have fixed the typo. Always find proof reading hard. And thanks for the encouragement. It isn't easy but it is something I am finding really rewarding at the moment.

I'll post Chapter 2 in the next couple of days.