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Eric the meek

Fiveways Wilf
NSC Patron
Aug 24, 2020
7,139
Sorry if this comes across as negative, but I don't think either of them particularly capture the sense of loss, bewilderment and yearning of a parent whose child has been missing for six long years.
For instance, the woman in B looks more angry than grieving for a missing child.

It might have helped if you had given your reasoning for the styling you have chosen. What are you trying to convey?
 




gripper stebson

Well-known member
Jul 27, 2004
6,690
Sorry if this comes across as negative, but I don't think either of them particularly capture the sense of loss, bewilderment and yearning of a parent whose child has been missing for six long years.
For instance, the woman in B looks more angry than grieving for a missing child.

It might have helped if you had given your reasoning for the styling you have chosen. What are you trying to convey?

Not negative at all.

All I need to do at this point is get people to either read the blurb or click 'PLAY'.

It's really hard to convey much when you have a 2 inch thumbnail to work with... that'll come with the attached blurb hopefully once interest has been piqued.

Cheers x.
 






















Eric the meek

Fiveways Wilf
NSC Patron
Aug 24, 2020
7,139
Not negative at all.

All I need to do at this point is get people to either read the blurb or click 'PLAY'.

It's really hard to convey much when you have a 2 inch thumbnail to work with... that'll come with the attached blurb hopefully once interest has been piqued.

Cheers x.

In that case, I would choose A. Black text on a white background and left to right text is a bit more user friendly. Also, with B, your eye is first drawn to the woman, and it takes you a moment to register what the text reads. Note also that when motorway signs were being designed, people spent a lot of time researching what made them easy to read at speed. One of the findings was to put everything in upper and lower case, so 'Brighton, Hove, Six years gone'. Good luck.
 


knocky1

Well-known member
Jan 20, 2010
13,109
As said A murder and B twee.

Without a synopsis do you want NSC to come up with C?

I'll be watching it anyway. Been a fan since Newhaven tunnels and onwards.
 








Meade's Ball

Well-known member
Jul 7, 2003
13,653
Hither (sometimes Thither)
B suggests they are deceased. Gone, dead, ghostly. The actress' expression doesn't speak to me of a child missing. Whilst A seems loyal to the plot line.
But the question is which would prod my intrigue most, and I think a.
 












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