dingodan
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- Feb 16, 2011
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More good news, Brexit likely to raise council tax in many areas as local economy tanks.
https://www.theguardian.com/politic...oss-uk-believe-brexit-will-hurt-local-economy
The way you have structured the "headline" you've given the article implies a few things.
"Likely to" implies that there is an evidence basis for the assertion, actually you should have said "predicted to", the evidence here is a survey of beliefs. The article itself uses the word "predict", not "likely".
When you say "as local economy tanks", you've separated this from the prediction, it sounds like the council tax rise is likely, but the tanking is a given. Actually the tanking was the primary prediction and the council tax rises an extension of that prediction..
Based on what the actually article says, you should have said "local economies predicted to "tank" (your word), possibly leading to council tax rises". The difference is subtle, but important.