1067seagull

[1066gull]

I am not your friend and I do not know you.

you are a child, and acting pathetic.

there is no place for you here or my life, not ever.

and learn to spell.

 

[TWOCHOICEStom]

6 pages

 

[Bry Nylon]

I am not your friend and I do not know you.

you are a child, and acting pathetic.

there is no place for you here or my life, not ever.

and learn to spell.

I've read better poems, but I quite like it.

 

[Frutos]

I am not your friend and I do not know you.

you are a child, and acting pathetic.

there is no place for you here or my life, not ever.

and learn to spell.

 

[Virgo's Haircut]

you are a child, and acting pathetic.

This has to be quote of the year?

 

[pasty]

All you need now.....

 

[Uncle Spielberg]

The term is Schizophrenia. A split or multiple personality.

 

[Frutos]

Anyone?

 

[Simster]

You.


Couldn't.



Make.


It.




Up.

 

[nail-Z]

Is starting a thread about another poster still a banning offence?

 

[One True BHA]

The term is Schizophrenia. A split or multiple personality.

A common misconception. You are wrong.

 

[Trigger]

Hen.

 

[Billy the Fish]

Classic :thud:

 

[Box of Frogs]

The term is Schizophrenia. A split or multiple personality.

Wrong! It is a mental disorder with symptoms such as paranoia, delusions and social disfunction.

 

[Don Quixote]

well well what have we here

 

[HampshireSeagulls]

Good. I am waiting for Office 07 to install, so this should alleviate the boredom.

I am not your friend, I do not know you.

You are a child, and acting pathetic.

There is no place for you here, or my life,

not ever. And please do learn how to spell.

I have taken the liberty of tidying up the initial poem. Using 10 syallables per line makes this a lovely example of an Iambic Pentameter with a measured conclusion. The lack of rhyme is not a problem, as this forms quite a nice example of free verse. Anyone else got a comment?

 

[Uncle Spielberg]

I think I meant borderline personality.

 

[Lord Bracknell]

Good. I am waiting for Office 07 to install, so this should alleviate the boredom.

I am not your friend, I do not know you.

You are a child, and acting pathetic.

There is no place for you here, or my life,

not ever. And please do learn how to spell.

I have taken the liberty of tidying up the initial poem. Using 10 syallables per line makes this a lovely example of an Iambic Pentameter with a measured conclusion. The lack of rhyme is not a problem, as this forms quite a nice example of free verse. Anyone else got a comment?

It's better in French, I think.

Je ne suis pas votre ami et je ne vous connais pas.
Vous êtes un enfant, et vous agissez pathétique.
Il n'y a aucun endroit pour vous ici ou dans ma vie, pas jamais.
Et apprenez à orthographier.

 

[Franks Wild Years]

Non sono il vostro amico, io non lo conosco.
Siete un bambino e comportarti patetico.
Non ci è posto per voi qui, o la mia vita, non mai.
Ed impari prego come ortografare.

 

[Timbo]

Je Suis a rock star, a la south of France.