Jerry Milton
New member
- Aug 10, 2016
- 13
Hi guys! Me and my friend Carl have been working on a new song and wanted to get your feedback! Here goes!
To the tune of Cecilia by Simon and Garfunkle!
ROSENIOR - your breaking my heart
your breaking down the right wing - daily
oh rosenior, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home
Watching games in the afternoon with Rosenior
Up in my bedroom (watching games)
I got up to clean my face
When I get back to my seat Bruno's taken your place!
So what you all think? We are trying to come up with some decent lyrics for the rasta bit but the stuff Carl is coming up with is pretty offensive. So I was hoping there might be an aspiring lyricist out there who could help us out a bit!?
To the tune of Cecilia by Simon and Garfunkle!
ROSENIOR - your breaking my heart
your breaking down the right wing - daily
oh rosenior, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home
Watching games in the afternoon with Rosenior
Up in my bedroom (watching games)
I got up to clean my face
When I get back to my seat Bruno's taken your place!
So what you all think? We are trying to come up with some decent lyrics for the rasta bit but the stuff Carl is coming up with is pretty offensive. So I was hoping there might be an aspiring lyricist out there who could help us out a bit!?