I'd rather read that than the bollox two worded replies some numnuts write. Keep it up Tim
I find that quite offensive I have never spouted homophobic abuse nor would I. I just don't like Pride - Nor it seems does anyone else anymore.
Cheers mate. Again it was just a preview to a game not a personal experience I suppose. Its not proof read and it can be difficult to review your own work. Hence why you have proof readers and sub editors.
For what it's worth I agree with Frutos - the spelling and grammar is pretty dire and I'm amazed the Argus let it near their website without being proof-read.
If you can fight through the errors, it's an OK read though.
Seriously mate there may be a few misplaced or unplaced commas. But can you point out the spelling errors for me.
- "clamor" has a 'u' in it unless you're American.
- "Messer's" doesn't need either the second 'e' or an apostrophe.
Don't agree with Messer's.
There's a saying "If you haven't got anything nice to say, then don't say anything at all"
There are some people on NSC who are considered " open season " for abuse. Tim is one of them. I should know. Personally I find all the abuse to Tim rather offensive and unnecessary. DESIST.
Why be offensive to me ?. Tim can be a cock on here but he is a decent bloke really.
I find that quite offensive I have never spouted homophobic abuse nor would I. I just don't like Pride - Nor it seems does anyone else anymore.
Oh do f*** off with the humility and outrage bollocks. You're a tried and tested bigot. You don't like Pride but neither do you like nor approve of homosexuals. You also don't approve of anyone who stumbles into your horribly banal Terry and June existence, you mundane little nobody.
If people want to read the illiterate ramblings of a modern day Mr Pooter then good for them but you've offended enough people in the past to fully justify the occasional abuse when you start one of your self-aggrandising threads.
Don't be surprised when you get grief, Timmy. It's called karma.
Oh do f*** off with the humility and outrage bollocks. You're a tried and tested bigot. You don't like Pride but neither do you like nor approve of homosexuals. You also don't approve of anyone who stumbles into your horribly banal Terry and June existence, you mundane little nobody.
If people want to read the illiterate ramblings of a modern day Mr Pooter then good for them but you've offended enough people in the past to fully justify the occasional abuse when you start one of your self-aggrandising threads.
Don't be surprised when you get grief, Timmy. It's called karma.